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Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England

0 posted 2009-03-17 08:52 PM



The seeds of life

If you listen, there is music in the wind
Laughter in the sway of the trees
The grass as it sways sings it's mellow song
And the flute of the lone wanderer plays

He plays to bring peace to a turbulent world
You hear the sad cry of nature, doomed to fade
And die under the concrete jungle of man
A few small seeds of life escape

They are held lovingly by the hand of the wind
being carried to a safe place to be nurtured
To halt the ever growing scar
That man has made on this land
Of the free

Annie
17-3-2009

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2009-03-17 11:52 PM


Natures beauty is more precious than ever.

before they paved paradise!!!

Nice to read you.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2009-03-17 11:56 PM


Yo dear Anniepimm,

This is fairly well done.  It could stand some well placed punctuation.

I rather love my concrete jungle.  We have more life here than you could imagine.

Love Bobby

Anniepimm
Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England
3 posted 2009-03-18 04:06 AM


Thank you both for your feed back
Much appreciated..

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