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EvanescenceShy
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since 2009-03-01
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0 posted 2009-03-17 07:47 PM


Please go easy; I'm new to free-verse and not well-versed anyway.Thanks.

You were my life
And I, your wife.
I gave you everything in me;
You gave me a beautiful baby.
We played at the park, embraced one another;
laughed, talked.
I poured my soul,
You took it and stole;
And, turning into a horrific Devil,
You left us, cold--but promised that
In fact you would always stay close,
And then left and never a word.
You typical liar, deceiving our world.

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-03-17 08:19 PM


This hurts, you voiced the pain and the anger very well.

Love,
Margherita

Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England
2 posted 2009-03-17 08:57 PM


Excellently well voiced really can relate to it as well thank you for sharing
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