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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Sometimes This seems An out of body Experience That there’s Someone more Than the man I’d known before Who watches you Comb your hair Like Lazarus Returned to Consciousness Just opening His eyes to see The desert That was his life Now a paradise Which he Never again Wants to leave . |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Refreshing oasis write, John. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Like Lazarus Returned to Consciousness Just opening His eyes to see The desert That was his life Now a paradise When the mundane becomes miraculous... you've found true appreciation for what you have. *S* Beautiful work!! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very effective 'write'! applause!! |
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