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gdcod2player
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0 posted 2009-03-14 11:29 AM


I’m losing something rare
The love I would give to you
It’s slowly dying away
I looked in your eyes
The beauty you have there
The dawn of a dead world
My world has fell behind
She has everything I need
Days till the end is coming near
Safety is posted on the front door
Why aren’t you here?
Do you want to be saved?
Do you care that I’m real?

We can break this cycle
When you get here I’ll be waiting patiently
The pictures on the floor
What do they mean to you?
Is it everything we need or is that just me?
When can we run from this trap?
We need get out of this place
You’re my world of cure
I want to speak of my love to you
Though I can’t bring myself to say
That I love you
Your heart has me wondering all the time
Why can’t I have her?

[This message has been edited by gdcod2player (03-14-2009 12:09 PM).]

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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
1 posted 2009-03-14 11:43 AM


That was lovely keep it up

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2009-03-14 01:04 PM


it's not good to wonder

this poem is touching


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