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"'Fatootin', The Return"
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"'Fatootin', The Return" |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Bill, You stay out of that park, and leave those critters to fatoot in peace. You've been warned. They can turn on you, and be vicious. Bobby |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
He he I'm laughing at Bobby's comment. Hey Bill you're starting a small series here. It's really cool stuff. Cute little critters and the message is getting better all the time. Write on! Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bill, you are such a tease! ~ and you're almost as adorable as those two fatootin' ferrets! I'll be lookin' out for fatootin' poem #3!!!  Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, gosh, I love the little guy with the guitar! You describe a world of tender involvement ... Love, Margherita  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I adored the first one, and this one just as much |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Bill Love the words and the whole story. Looking forward to #3. By the way, Spring is coming and you know what happens in the Springtime. Their little footlootin could bring about a few of the "little ones". Now don't you go snoopin in on them - they may need their privacy. Ariana |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
With all these creative observation you will have a book soon. I also love that one with the guitar. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Bill don't be a spoil sport, let them do their fatootin in private, I'll bet you done your fatootin in private. enjoyed. Lindsay |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
They're going to be putting out a "Do Not Disturb" sign... just for your benefit! LOL Enjoyed this! *S* |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bobby - it's one crazy park for sure, all kinds of little critters running around... ethome - one more writing on the way, h'mmmm... Linda - thank you my dear for the lovely comment. Made my day... Margherita - that little guy with the guitar is a cutie pie, #3 on the way... passing shadows - glad you like this one also.. Ariana - Yikes, is that what fatootin does. My goodness, we'll be overrun with fatooters... D.Lester Young - they are sure fun to write about, not sure about the book though... LindsayP - h'mmmm, haven't figured out what they are doing as yet, but I will, h'aaaaa... suthern - now that's an idea for the sign, made just for BC... BC |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
This is precious and so says so much about you for noticing their little world of amor |
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