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Chalmette Guy
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0 posted 2009-03-13 01:16 PM


Like the interplay of colors
Dancing to their very own tune
We complement each other
As stars unto the moon
Only one who knows my mind
Yet there are things yet unknown
Things which remain held close
Things which should be shown
We skirt wonderfully around the issue
Of always and what might have been
Instead of embracing the distance
And differences of each other’s whim
Allowing us to propel to another place
Another level of unbridled intensity
Where the seasons come and go
But there instead we will always be
Give in to the different shades of love
Such as different hues between day and night
I am waiting in patient awe of you
I am the shadow and you are my light


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A Romantic Heart
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1 posted 2009-03-13 01:46 PM


ooo...I loved the last line...I am the shadow and you are my night!

very well done!

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2009-03-13 04:55 PM


This is akin to a whisper of silk,
PK. Enjoyed this very much!


HelmutB
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3 posted 2009-03-13 05:26 PM


Such as different hues between day and night

Like it! Bravo

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.  


suthern
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4 posted 2009-03-14 10:28 PM


Give in to the different shades of love
Such as different hues between day and night
I am waiting in patient awe of you
I am the shadow and you are my light

Romantic and lovely... wonderful write!!

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