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Open Poetry #44

Words Are All I Have

Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2009-03-13 08:34 AM

Words are all that I have
To bring comfort as well as heat
Between the lines of wanton verse
Where we forever are doomed to meet
Words must somehow offer arms
To embrace with fingers in your hair
Lips to kiss you in reverence
As if physically I were there
Words hopefully bring you to the point
Of passion’s exulted climax desire
Then to burn, yes burn in afterglow
Of the wicked heat of this fire

To give you what you want or ever need
Words are all I have for you to breathe

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2009-03-13 09:42 AM

then I'll breathe deeply!

this is wonderfully sweet

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2009-03-13 11:07 AM

poetic and romantic! Love it!

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2009-03-13 11:29 AM

This speaks to me. I have friends I've never met, and they mean as much to me as family now. The internet is a wonderful thing, but it can be frustrating as all get out. I like your construction and language choices in this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2009-03-13 02:34 PM

And very beautiful words they are, PK.

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2009-03-13 04:09 PM

shew! I need CPR ...some more word CPR after reading this...call 911 lol!

very romantic and full of passion and love!
just what the doctor ordered!

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

6 posted 2009-03-13 04:25 PM

Thank you thank you thank you all....did I say thank you? lol

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2009-03-14 10:18 PM

To give you what you want or ever need
Words are all I have for you to breathe

When the words are this beautiful and passionate, who needs oxygen? *S* Simply superb, my friend... simply superb!!!

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