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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-03-12 09:25 AM



I never did mind being sand or dirt
whatever it was god said he made us out of
some clay pots are pretty cool to the eye

and I could always imagine a sense of humor
when he stuck on some parts and removed some
and then left just enough dryness there

to always make us thirsty for a kiss at least
and sometimes a lot more then just a sip
of some sustaining liquid to heal our parching

I remember your smile at the thought originally
and how you kept your lips dry when you kissed me
so I would always have to come back again

and you always hinted about owning an ocean

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Chalmette Guy
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1 posted 2009-03-12 10:20 AM


Very cool, Dark.

Amazing how they can always leave you thirsty for more huh?

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2009-03-12 12:08 PM


CG...thanks guy..yep it is quite the perplexing
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2009-03-12 07:02 PM


love this...my favorite now
just because...

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4 posted 2009-03-12 07:25 PM


D...you rock my socks mister...
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2009-03-13 06:23 AM


ms MMs...thanks babe, am pleased that you took to it fondly

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ms suesea...I do enjoy you barefoot after...thanks babe

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6 posted 2009-03-13 12:50 PM


Hey wait for me, let me get ma waterwings! ((^*))  Loved this one!
Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2009-03-13 01:18 PM


ms myst..thanks lady...no need for the wings, I have my lifeguard patch on my speedo..(please don't visualize)
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8 posted 2009-03-14 09:39 PM


to always make us thirsty for a kiss at least
and sometimes a lot more then just a sip
of some sustaining liquid to heal our parching

And I have to settle for this bottled water. LOL Loved this! *S*

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2009-03-15 07:17 AM


ms suthern..I know a place that sells some special bottled water if you want the addy..thanks lady friend
Margherita
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10 posted 2009-03-15 02:20 PM


quote:
I remember your smile at the thought originally
and how you kept your lips dry when you kissed me
so I would always have to come back again

and you always hinted about owning an ocean




So this is a strategy that works! Beware of the raising ocean!

You bring smiles.

"Forbidden" has come to an end?

Love,
Margherita

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11 posted 2009-03-15 02:25 PM


someone once said that people are mostly water and water flows the path of least resistance

there isn't an ocean around here so I just go all over



Krawdad
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12 posted 2009-03-15 11:27 PM


those darned hints will get you every time
Dark Stranger
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13 posted 2009-03-16 06:04 AM


ms mar...thank you lady friend...forbidden is still there..just has changed to the next level of whet perhaps..thanks babe

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ms dixie..thank you for your ocean smile lady


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Krawdad, thanks amigo

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