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Open Poetry #44
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Effigy
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disbelief

0 posted 2009-03-11 06:00 PM


dream of you and me
where we should see
what has come to be
after fantasy
and promiscuity
ravaged monogamy
leaving lovers off-key
on a broken melody
that’s noisy
dark and creepy
holding hearts chilly
scattered with debris

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with you
1 posted 2009-03-11 07:14 PM


"after fantasy
and promiscuity
ravaged monogamy
leaving lovers off-key
on a broken melody"

very sad write

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