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A Warm Place
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A Warm Place |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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He tells her of his desire And his deepest thoughts of love All the pleasures of the fire A warm place he tends to dream of She listens ever so patiently Keeping her thoughts to herself As he lays himself out vulnerably At a risk to his mental health He pours out thought after thought The chain has been lifted No more suppression to be fought As the words come gifted She knows now the time draws near When she shall know full well What it means to have someone dear To share in the soul’s inner spell He speaks of the cruel vagaries of chance Fate that can be together defeated After the truth in circles was firmly danced The friction of passion slowly heated She takes him under wings of love The concept of time defaced Flown like the flight of the dove To drown within his warm place |
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Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
Well; there's a pretty little thing. Soft, gentle as raindrops, and not a word wasted. Nice one! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"She knows now the time draws near When she shall know full well What it means to have someone dear To share in the soul’s inner spell" really enjoyed this  did I mention it's nice to have you back  |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Thank you windhover. And SEA, um, no. Just kidding. lol |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The joining of souls, first, makes the joining of flesh, that much sweeter.  A love poem after my own heart.  To love and loving! EA  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
As he lays himself out vulnerably At a risk to his mental health Never an easy task for anyone... *S* Beautiful write... I especially love the last verse! *S* |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
you describe it precisely , a perfect choice of words, I could not have said it better... I like being in a warm place, upon a cloud, in a sacred love nest, fluffy bed, enclosed in loving arms, theres no other place to be... I know where you are coming from on this! ~hugs~ARH |
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stacylynn418 Junior Member
since 2009-03-06
Posts 40new york |
i think this is my favorite poem ive read on this site so far. i think it is really well written and beautiful. |
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Laverne Pacquire Member
since 2009-11-15
Posts 96 |
thoughtful and graceful |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Thank you Laverne...I didn't realize people were reading in the archives. Thank you for reading me and reminding me about this poem. |
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