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A Warm Place

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Chalmette Guy
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He tells her of his desire
And his deepest thoughts of love
All the pleasures of the fire
A warm place he tends to dream of

She listens ever so patiently
Keeping her thoughts to herself
As he lays himself out vulnerably
At a risk to his mental health

He pours out thought after thought
The chain has been lifted
No more suppression to be fought
As the words come gifted

She knows now the time draws near
When she shall know full well
What it means to have someone dear
To share in the soulís inner spell

He speaks of the cruel vagaries of chance
Fate that can be together defeated
After the truth in circles was firmly danced
The friction of passion slowly heated

She takes him under wings of love
The concept of time defaced
Flown like the flight of the dove
To drown within his warm place
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Windhover
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1 posted 03-11-2009 04:12 PM       View Profile for Windhover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Windhover's Home Page   View IP for Windhover

Well; there's a pretty little thing. Soft, gentle as raindrops, and not a word wasted. Nice one!
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2 posted 03-11-2009 04:14 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

"She knows now the time draws near
When she shall know full well
What it means to have someone dear
To share in the soulís inner spell"

really enjoyed this

did I mention it's nice to have you back
Chalmette Guy
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3 posted 03-11-2009 04:18 PM       View Profile for Chalmette Guy   Email Chalmette Guy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chalmette Guy

Thank you windhover.
And SEA, um, no.

Just kidding. lol
Earth Angel
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4 posted 03-11-2009 05:18 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

The joining of souls, first, makes the joining of flesh, that much sweeter.

A love poem after my own heart.

To love and loving!

EA
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5 posted 03-14-2009 08:06 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

As he lays himself out vulnerably
At a risk to his mental health

Never an easy task for anyone... *S*

Beautiful write... I especially love the last verse! *S*
A Romantic Heart
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6 posted 03-14-2009 08:15 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

you describe it precisely , a perfect choice of words, I could not have said it better...

I like being in a warm place, upon a cloud,
in a sacred love nest, fluffy bed, enclosed in loving arms, theres no other place to be...

I know where you are coming from on this!
~hugs~ARH
stacylynn418
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7 posted 03-14-2009 09:56 PM       View Profile for stacylynn418   Email stacylynn418   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stacylynn418

i think this is my favorite poem ive read on this site so far.
i think it is really well written and beautiful.
Laverne Pacquire
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thoughtful and graceful
Chalmette Guy
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9 posted 03-08-2010 08:25 AM       View Profile for Chalmette Guy   Email Chalmette Guy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chalmette Guy

Thank you Laverne...I didn't realize people were reading in the archives.
Thank you for reading me and reminding me about this poem.
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