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Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18
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Stafford England

0 posted 2009-03-10 04:42 PM


    


Where snow gently falls
And melts against yearning lips,
There I will await.


Dedicated to Shannon Rose Kelly, my beloved.




Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

© Copyright 2009 Luke Doubtfire - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2009-03-10 04:57 PM


What a gorgeous winter scene! I think I can see her eagerly waiting for you there in the trees! lol

By now you must have penned enough love poems for your beloved Shannon, to fill a book! ~ and what a treasure that would be!


Linda

Indigo
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2 posted 2009-03-10 07:34 PM


Exquisitely rendered are the ice and heat of your words!  Enjoyed, S-.

Indigo

Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2009-03-10 07:49 PM


Snowflakes and kisses
heaven-sent blessings of love
to know true fusion
*

Beautiful words and picture.
Love,
Margherita  


Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2009-03-10 07:56 PM


A beautiful gift for your beloved Shannon!
INclan
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5 posted 2009-03-17 08:33 AM


OUTSTANDING post!
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2009-03-17 11:00 AM


If it was a kiss from you...I can see all that snow melting off those trees...

A kiss to melt your heart ....

I would endure the snow, the cold,
for a kiss like that........

now where to I get one of those ? lol

~Hugs
~ARH

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
7 posted 2009-03-17 11:33 AM


Beautiful picture and beautiful poetically expressed thought.

Eric

Pilgrimage
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8 posted 2009-03-17 12:08 PM


That is quite beautiful.  I love form poetry, and this one proves why.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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