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stacylynn418
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since 2009-03-06
Posts 40
new york

0 posted 2009-03-09 06:44 PM



We’ll be the story
That never gets told;
A love nobody got to see.
A boy and a girl
Who once fell in love,
And were at one time meant to be.

We’ll be the fighters
Who fought and who lost;
The ones that never stood a chance.
The ones that live all alone
As if its all that they’ve known,
But deep down long for romance.

We’ll be the dreamers
That once shared a dream
That never had a chance to come true.
And beneath these unspoken words
And long lost dreams,
I will never let go of you.

© Copyright 2009 stacy carter - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2009-03-09 06:52 PM


Yo dear Stacylynn418,

I like the way you've put this poem together.  It's very well written.

Love Bobby

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