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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Daddy, Break me to resurrect me Your little girl is lost Break me to show me the way Renew my heart to only have room for you Renew my heart so I would never put another one before you Daddy, I love you but I don't know how to do your will I don't have the strength to do this on my own Daddy, don't let go of my hand I am nothing without you! I am sorry I seek love of another before I seek you I am sorry for disobeying you Break me So I'll finally accept your love for me Daddy, I need you The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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impact Junior Member
since 2009-03-07
Posts 27 |
this really made me feel. I love the "break me" line beautiful |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Sad -Juju |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kristen, what a heartfelt, prayerful plea to Our Father. Your use of the word "Daddy" is very effective in portraying how you feel like a "lost" little girl. Love & God's Light, Linda  |
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EvanescenceShy New Member
since 2009-03-01
Posts 8 |
One of the most beautiful poems I've ever read.It truly touched me! |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Kris, This is powerful and moving. There's not much more to say. I think I'll just sit and absorb a bit. Alison |
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