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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
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Nashville

0 posted 2009-03-09 01:43 AM


Until you kissed me I was asleep
in this life, not caring if
I collapsed in small lumps
across this land of burden.
I follow my own path
that leads to your
arms, surrounding
my torn body.
Can you kiss me
another time and make
me feel human
for a split second?
Or must I imagine
that while I walk
this earth I am
truly alone.
But that kiss,
simple and sustained
has me transformed
and free.



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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-03-09 10:28 AM


Lovely! The magic effects of a kiss. Life vibrates in new tones.

Love,
Margherita

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with you
2 posted 2009-03-09 01:27 PM




this is so wonderful! Nothing beats a kiss from that special someone...

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
3 posted 2009-03-09 02:18 PM


this is good share and stuff, a kiss awakes, a kiss refresh, a kiss makes strong.

best wishes

yann

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