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Open Poetry #44

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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2009-03-09 01:38 AM

All dreams become one in
a flash of brilliance, as you
hold on to the hope that
what you have become is
more than the sum of
what you are in your life.
Theres that last moment
of light which transforms
the air around you
completing those simple
thoughts that you take
as you ride the wind.
Is it easy to say that
you love someone, easy to
confirm you care,
when the banter flows
freely, you sense the
freedom to show yourself.
I feel this freedom, like
a hot wind through
my souls last stand,
and wish upon you my
heart and care for times
are better when you're there.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2009-03-09 02:16 PM

I love the authenticity of the poem and the emotions and the beautiful message...I love the write too...

best wishes

yann

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