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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2009-03-07 12:23 PM


Capturing Eyes

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2009-03-07 12:32 PM


As they say, "The 'Eyes' have it!" ~ or should that be "The 'Ayes' have it"? lol

I would wager that behind your shades, we'd see your own "Capturing Eyes".


Linda

Artic Wind
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2 posted 2009-03-07 02:13 PM


ouu! The picture gave me some chills!


ARCTIC WIND

2islander2
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3 posted 2009-03-07 03:49 PM


superb Bill, the photo is scary and made me think of some Tim Burton Picture...Thanks for the beautiful poem.

yann

vandana
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4 posted 2009-03-07 05:56 PM


nice read
Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2009-03-07 06:46 PM


Yo Bill,

It's a nice poem, and I like the eyes.  

Bobby

LindsayP
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6 posted 2009-03-07 09:06 PM



Yes I'd say the eyes have it Bill

You penned it well, enjoyed.

Lindsay

Suncleaver
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7 posted 2009-03-07 10:00 PM


Fantastic Bill, and I believe you've shown a darker side of your romance hitherto unplumbed.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

Ariana
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8 posted 2009-03-07 10:23 PM


Bill

I like your poetry and the words are beautiful.  The eyes are scary

Ariana

Noel
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9 posted 2009-03-07 10:35 PM


This is gorgeous and presented so elegantly.

Outstanding poetry, all of it!!

I'm so glad to be here among so many talented writers.  Just beautiful, truly.

Margherita
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10 posted 2009-03-08 08:04 PM


As long as the shadows are tender, dear Bill, it won't be too chilly ...
The picture, though frightening, is really magnetic!
Certainly darkness sometimes insinuates the brightest romance.

Beautifully written.

Love,
Margherita

ethome
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11 posted 2009-03-08 08:12 PM


That's a deeply mystic lady you've become enamoured with Bill.

The picture and the words are married to each other in a different way opening a different school of thought.

Very nice indeed.

Eric

Sharon Rose
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12 posted 2009-03-09 10:22 PM


Bill

     Loved the poetry, WOW! scary eyes.

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