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Verve
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0 posted 03-07-2009 03:04 AM       View Profile for Verve   Email Verve   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Verve




The winds slowly glided in,

Whispering gently the sound of distant chimes.

A sudden flash of light,

Dancing wildly through the darkened sky.

Then a clap thundered nearby,

Bellowing deeply way up high.

The heavy clouds burst forth,

Raining down a rhythmic beat.

Somewhere in this starless night,

The symphony is now complete.



"Le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne connait point.
The heart has its reasons of which reason knows nothing."

~ Blaise Pascal ~
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tao power
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1 posted 03-07-2009 04:50 AM       View Profile for tao power   Email tao power   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tao power

When I read this poem there was a thunderstorm outside, so it was fitting.  

I imagine Frasier Crane delivering this poem for some reason.
Margherita
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Eternity


2 posted 03-07-2009 06:11 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

I see you are one of the first Pip members, but I have not seen much of you. Nice that you are posting again.

I love rain and thunder and for me the symphony is complete here, just as you say.

Beautiful!

Love,
Margherita
pontyjim
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3 posted 03-07-2009 07:32 AM       View Profile for pontyjim   Email pontyjim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit pontyjim's Home Page   View IP for pontyjim

Brilliant. 'nuff said.
secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 03-07-2009 09:30 PM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

nice imagery!!

applause!
Noel
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5 posted 03-07-2009 10:47 PM       View Profile for Noel   Email Noel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Noel

I enjoyed every word of the raindance you wrote.... The chimes blowing in the wind brought your storm to life.

Excellent writing, Verve.
Verve
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6 posted 03-29-2009 05:46 AM       View Profile for Verve   Email Verve   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Verve


Thank you all for your lovely comments!

Isn't the rain just simply a beautiful work of nature? I love it. =)

I have been away for the forums for a long time now. It's nice to drop by again.
Verve
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7 posted 03-29-2009 05:46 AM       View Profile for Verve   Email Verve   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Verve

Thank you all for your lovely comments!

Isn't the rain just simply a beautiful work of nature? I love it. =)

I have been away for the forums for a long time now. It's nice to drop by again.
kindredspirit
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8 posted 06-07-2009 08:16 PM       View Profile for kindredspirit   Email kindredspirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kindredspirit

i love the feelings, the images, the power.
nicely done!
Midnitesun
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9 posted 06-08-2009 06:31 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Look what the storm blew in...verve!
Your concise, powerful 'quick' imagery fits a thunder storm perfectly! Bravo!
Please visit more often.
Verve
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10 posted 06-08-2009 07:22 AM       View Profile for Verve   Email Verve   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Verve



thank u both!! =)

hehehehe... yeah have more time these couple weeks to snoop around the forums and check out my fave poets. =)


Marchmadness
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11 posted 06-13-2009 02:58 PM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

I love rain and enjoyed your "storm", Verve,
                                       Ida
icebox
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12 posted 06-13-2009 05:15 PM       View Profile for icebox   Email icebox   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for icebox

It is raining here now.
Verve
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13 posted 06-15-2009 04:40 PM       View Profile for Verve   Email Verve   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Verve



Thank you Ida and Icebox, for dropping by. =)
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