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gdcod2player
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since 2008-07-26
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0 posted 2009-03-04 11:44 PM



Ill fight for it as my American dream
You’re the reasons to play in the rain
The beauty I want to win
With the power inside
This dream will be real
To many hopes for one man
The reason people believe
Is to have one last chance to ride

(not done, im kinda happy with it so far
though some of you may not be)

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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
1 posted 2009-03-04 11:57 PM


Please finish

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2009-03-06 07:32 PM


Yeah, keep on.

Eric

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