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Windhover
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 179
UK

0 posted 2009-03-04 04:53 PM

You say my words are beautiful; Thank You, Milady,You are kind.
They are... but thoughts; and, in my thoughts,
You are always somewhere, there.
But, no surprise; for, when I write them, You dance brightly, in my mind,
and thus, explains perhaps, why words I rhyme
are ever, sweet, and fair.

Yet, words I craft, are, but pale shadow of sweet thoughts I hold for You.
Such pictures that my heart would paint,
cannot be compassed round, with rhyme.
Such words do not exist... save, deep within the Soul...
it is quite true;
and thus, cannot be written here,
and I needs must fail... every time.

Yet, though pale shadow, they may be,
they have sweet virtue; they speak true;
and thus, may stand, as Portrait of a Love,
soft whispered, from the heart;
that cannot not dim, as drifting years unwind...
my tiny gift to You,
a sweet-versed Immortality; to shine,
long after we depart.

These Heart-thoughts, echoing down the years; someday, should they be read by chance,
will whisper...
She was truly loved;
indeed, this was a Grand Romance.

[This message has been edited by Windhover (03-05-2009 11:13 AM).]

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2009-03-05 03:59 PM

Your soul whispers so softly ~ so sweetly, of that "Grand Romance".

Linda

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2009-03-05 04:45 PM

awwww....

she is lucky, to say the least

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2009-03-06 07:44 PM

Romantic poetry.
It just never dies.

"Yet, though pale shadow, they may be,
they have sweet virtue; they speak true;
and thus, may stand, as Portrait of a Love,
soft whispered, from the heart;
that cannot not dim, as drifting years unwind...
my tiny gift to You,
a sweet-versed Immortality; to shine,
long after we depart.

These Heart-thoughts, echoing down the years; someday, should they be read by chance,
will whisper...
She was truly loved;
indeed, this was a Grand Romance."

Yep, just never dies and that's a good thing. We all need the high from time to time.

Eric

Noel
Junior Member

since 2009-03-06

Posts 42
West Coast

4 posted 2009-03-07 12:13 PM

The love shines so brightly with each and every word!

This is a real gem!

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