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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Yes If I could hold This moment I would do it As well Outside again The air is warming And freeing the world Of snow I will go out Off to work Mingle with people Fill with myriad details The passing hours Pale white shoulders Long dark hair You are beautiful Beautiful Beautiful Beautiful And when the sun sets On this day In the western sky All I will remember Is your one Sideward glance . |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is captivating...think I'll read it again to soak in the ambiance...slower this time...really slower |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
superb slice of Impressionistic Romanticism! MUCH applause!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Depending on how its tossed your way, holding onto that 'sideward glance' can be a healing memory. |
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tao power Member
since 2009-02-24
Posts 109 |
cool poem! Many times I've kept a picture of my girl in my head to help the long work day go by. i kno the feeling of this poem well. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Lovely -Juju |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
 You make me smile. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Outside again The air is warming And freeing the world Of snow" ~ Yes! Yes! Yes!  "All I will remember Is your one Sideward glance" ~ That must have been one memorable glance! A pleasure to read.  EA |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The roots of that familiarity spell the love of reality. Great stuff! Eric |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
applause yann |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
this one gets even better every time I re-read it! continuing (major) applause!! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I remember a "particular" sideward glance, years upon years ago ... my heart still mis-steps with the memory. I thank you for refreshing that... wonderful write... j. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you all I'm glad so many like it John . |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I read this a few days ago and wanted to respond, but literally lacked the words. *S* But when a poem touches me speechless, I can still applaud. *S*  |
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