Silent Poetess (I read her words today)

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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2009-03-04 08:36 AM

Her words, precise, a flair, inborn
for the poetic and the prophecy,
thematic of "from the cradle to the grave"
laced with "lost at love" and battered heart

she woke sleep halls
with shards of her affliction
in shadows worn, and then she self aborted,
papering the walls with 3D insides,
red for blood,white for the angelic,
black for the darkside, illuminations,
as hers was slipping right beside us,
as she sipped a brilliant tonic,
spiked with melodrama,comedy, mystery
and her own script playing out (or was it)

Her writes, indicative of a brilliant
light of higherknowledge, along, but
never far from, first walked steps
leading into womanhood, her seeds rooted
in darkcloud theatre, doomed of those
that strain to stay afloat,forsaking anchor
or the crutch of life support

she made the tradeoff opting
for an early curtain call
chose by self, most likely

her offerings were pure echantment,
as I awakened from the charlotry of
fluffy sugarwashed roses and sagas
I feared I'd never shovel out from

I read her words today, so finely tuned,
and much beyond those that reek
of mediocre,with both admiration,
and bordering envy, I read
each verse, her god had blessed and
nailed upon her tender wings of sorrow.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-04-2009 11:13 AM).]

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

1 posted 2009-03-04 08:41 AM

~KEEPER~

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2009-03-04 08:43 AM

Michelle, this is wonderful. And I
will ditto Midnitesun...

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

3 posted 2009-03-04 11:00 AM

Three for three, Goddess!

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

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highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2009-03-04 11:44 AM

Michele - I sit here in awe of your talent...

BC

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

5 posted 2009-03-04 12:15 PM

wow...I'm almost speechless...but I must say this...one of the best I've ever read...longing for more...that is truly how this one left me...longing for more

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

6 posted 2009-03-04 12:19 PM

"Her writes, indicative of a brilliant
light of higherknowledge, along, but
never far from, first walked steps
leading into womanhood, her seeds rooted
in darkcloud theatre, doomed of those
that strain to stay afloat,forsaking anchor
or the crutch of life support"

amazing...so very amazing...

I LOVE reading you!!

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

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West Coast

7 posted 2009-03-04 12:20 PM

ms inki..you are never speechless are you babe..waycoolish!!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

8 posted 2009-03-05 05:14 PM

Amazing write, inkgoddess.
Ida

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

9 posted 2009-03-05 08:12 PM

quote:
I read
each verse, her god had blessed and
nailed upon her tender wings of sorrow.

Wow, she truly inspired you to write an exceptional poem, dear Michele!

Love,
Margherita

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

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Ohio

10 posted 2009-03-05 08:50 PM

thank you for stopping by and leaving your thoughts

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

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standing on a shadow's lace

11 posted 2009-03-05 09:07 PM

you are so very talented

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

12 posted 2009-03-12 11:00 AM

Michelle, this is truly beautiful poetry!!
I'm at a loss of words!
Hugs,
Ethel

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

13 posted 2009-03-12 11:44 AM

I'm glad this was bumped.

Incredible ending...

"I read her words today, so finely tuned,
and much beyond those that reek
of mediocre,with both admiration,
and bordering envy, I read
each verse, her god had blessed and
nailed upon her tender wings of sorrow."

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

14 posted 2009-03-14 08:39 PM

Beautiful work... I especially like the last verse!! *S*

unboundpoetess
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since 2008-05-24

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15 posted 2009-03-14 08:49 PM

Brilliant and beautiful.

H

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

16 posted 2009-03-14 09:37 PM

I see you still have your own private label of ink,
and it's amazing what you do with it.

Absolutely brilliant poetry, good goddess.

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

17 posted 2013-05-17 09:15 PM

she was the best I have read on this board

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