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Silent Poetess (I read her words today)

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inkedgoddess
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Her words, precise, a flair, inborn
for the poetic and the prophecy,
thematic of "from  the cradle to the grave"
laced with "lost at love" and battered heart

she woke sleep halls
with shards of her affliction
in shadows worn, and then she self aborted,
papering the walls with 3D insides,
red for blood,white for the angelic,
black for the darkside, illuminations,
as hers was slipping right beside us,
as she sipped a brilliant tonic,
spiked with melodrama,comedy, mystery
and her own script playing out (or was it)

Her writes, indicative of a brilliant
light of higherknowledge, along, but
never far from, first walked steps
leading into womanhood, her seeds rooted
in darkcloud theatre, doomed of those
that strain to stay afloat,forsaking anchor
or the crutch of life support

she made the tradeoff opting
for an early curtain call
chose by self,  most likely

her offerings were pure echantment,
as I awakened from the charlotry of
fluffy sugarwashed roses and sagas
I feared I'd never shovel out from

I read her words today, so finely tuned,
and much beyond those that reek
of mediocre,with both admiration,
and bordering envy, I read
each verse, her god had blessed and
nailed upon her tender wings of sorrow.


[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-04-2009 11:13 AM).]

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1 posted 03-04-2009 08:41 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

~KEEPER~
Sunshine
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2 posted 03-04-2009 08:43 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Michelle, this is wonderful. And I
will ditto Midnitesun...



Earth Angel
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Three for three, Goddess!

Bill Charles
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4 posted 03-04-2009 11:44 AM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Michele - I sit here in awe of your talent...

BC
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wow...I'm almost speechless...but I must say this...one of the best I've ever read...longing for more...that is truly how this one left me...longing for more
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6 posted 03-04-2009 12:19 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

"Her writes, indicative of a brilliant
light of higherknowledge, along, but
never far from, first walked steps
leading into womanhood, her seeds rooted
in darkcloud theatre, doomed of those
that strain to stay afloat,forsaking anchor
or the crutch of life support"




amazing...so very amazing...

I LOVE reading you!!
Dark Stranger
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ms inki..you are never speechless are you babe..waycoolish!!
Marchmadness
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8 posted 03-05-2009 05:14 PM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

Amazing write, inkgoddess.
                     Ida
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quote:
I read
each verse, her god had blessed and
nailed upon her tender wings of sorrow.


Wow, she truly inspired you to write an exceptional poem, dear Michele!

Love,
Margherita

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thank you for stopping by and leaving your thoughts
1slick_lady
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you are so very talented
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12 posted 03-12-2009 11:00 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Michelle, this is truly beautiful poetry!!
I'm at a loss of words!
Hugs,
Ethel
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13 posted 03-12-2009 11:44 AM       View Profile for Chalmette Guy   Email Chalmette Guy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chalmette Guy

I'm glad this was bumped.

Incredible ending...

"I read her words today, so finely tuned,
and much beyond those that reek
of mediocre,with both admiration,
and bordering envy, I read
each verse, her god had blessed and
nailed upon her tender wings of sorrow."

suthern
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14 posted 03-14-2009 08:39 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Beautiful work... I especially like the last verse!! *S*
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15 posted 03-14-2009 08:49 PM       View Profile for unboundpoetess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for unboundpoetess

Brilliant and beautiful.

H
BluesSerenade
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16 posted 03-14-2009 09:37 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

I see you still have your own private label of ink,
and it's amazing what you do with it.

Absolutely brilliant poetry, good goddess.
EmmaRose
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she was the best I have read on this board
 
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