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WTBAKELAR

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Utah, USA

0 posted 2009-03-03 10:24 AM

Lov-in The Rain

Strolling hand in hand,
The warm summer breezes,
Carried sweet sents of Jasmine & Pine,

We knew as we wandered,
That we had not a care,
As the day disappeared with out time,

In a small meadow,
We stopped by a stream,
And lay in a field of tall grass,

Fluffy clouds drifted over,
Then it started to sprinkle,
We wondered how long it would last,

But the sky got heavy,
And the rain poured down,
We had nowhere to take cover,

So we shed our clothes,
And danced in the deluge
Drenched in this love for one another,

Thunder rumbled,
Wind howled round us,
We fell down in each other’s arms,

And knew there was no,
Better way to make love,
Engulfed in the power of the storm,

We bathed in wet passion,
And touched hot wet skin,
As our bodies from two became one,

The pounding of,
The rain and our hearts,
As fierce as when we’d begun,

Then the rain slowly passed,
As we embraced,
Washed in the thrill of this bliss,

And the sun peaked out,
As it set for the night,
We sealed our rendezvous dream with a kiss.

The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked.

Earth Angel
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1 posted 2009-03-03 10:29 AM

That is my kinda Love-In!!!!!!!!!

I THOROUGLY enjoyed this!!!!!!

Linda

tao power
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since 2009-02-24

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2 posted 2009-03-03 01:46 PM

i hate rain. it makes poems soggy. if it rains anymore i'll drown in the Sea of Cliche.

You seem to write well. Use your talent open new doors, not show us old windows.

WTBAKELAR

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since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

3 posted 2009-03-03 02:45 PM

Thanks Linda,  So Glad you liked it.

Tao,  You make me laugh,  Nothing worse than a soggy old cliche.

This was written for a good friend that likes the rain and going for walks in the great outdoors, Enjoying the gifts of Mother Nature.

I don't know about the rest of the story,

It may open new windows, though.

Thank you both for your kind comments.

SEA

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with you

4 posted 2009-03-03 03:30 PM

Well I LOVE the rain!!

wish it could rain every day....

Billy T..

this is beautiful...

[This message has been edited by Ron (03-03-2009 04:30 PM).]

WTBAKELAR

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Posts 1089
Utah, USA

5 posted 2009-03-03 05:09 PM

Thanks SEA, I am so glad you enjoyed the poem and the rain.

Here's hoping for Spring and Rain.

Always trying. WT.

SEA

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with you

6 posted 2009-03-03 05:12 PM

here's always hoping for rain lol

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2009-03-03 05:58 PM

Nice...James

Margherita
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8 posted 2009-03-03 06:06 PM

I love rain, there is some kind of intimacy with the rain, after all we are made of water too, up to 70% of our body!!

And when love is there, it just becomes perfect.

A lovely romantic "wet" poem.

Love,
Margherita

LindsayP
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9 posted 2009-03-03 07:41 PM

WT that is one sexy poem that I really enjoyed, tender and revealing to say the least. Take a bow my friend.

Lindsay

WTBAKELAR

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10 posted 2009-03-03 07:59 PM

Thanks James for stopping by to read my wet story.

Keep it dry.

WT.

WTBAKELAR

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11 posted 2009-03-03 08:02 PM

Margherita, You are one of my biggest fans and I appreciate it emencly, Your opinion is always important to me.

Thank you so much for your comments.

Love always, Tracey

WTBAKELAR

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Utah, USA

12 posted 2009-03-03 08:07 PM

Thanks, Lindsay,
My good friend, I love your wonderful poems and only wish I could write as well.

It truely makes me feel great when you like my work

Thank you so much for your kind comments.

Tracey.

Bill Charles
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13 posted 2009-03-03 11:41 PM

WTBAKELAR - I love the rain, and this poem with the graphic is just romantic as heck. Enjoyed this immensly...

BC

WTBAKELAR

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Posts 1089
Utah, USA

14 posted 2009-03-04 06:36 PM

Thanks Bill,
I knew emencly didn't look right. Thanks for the gentle nudge, immensly... (or is it knudge)

W.Tracey

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