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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2009-03-02 02:16 PM


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No man
No problem

And no man
Is without blame

Or sin— or guilt
Or whatever power
Wishes to label it

In matters of
Right or wrong
The gun in hand
Is one’s best friend
And ultimate final judge

Ah Comrades
There’s nothing then
As so well solves
Our present woes

As a bullet
Through the head


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© Copyright 2009 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2009-03-02 02:22 PM


John,

Don't talk like that.

Bobby

turtle
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2 posted 2009-03-02 05:50 PM


I suppose there's nothing like airing out one's mind.

But, Bobby's right.


1slick_lady
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3 posted 2009-03-02 08:35 PM


Gentlemen,


John is NOT referring to himself
he is tickling and enchanting you
with his intelligence
this is a poem about…..

Iosif Vissarionovich Dzhugashvili
who named himself Koba after a character
in a 19th century Georgian novel
“The Patricide” by Alexander Kazbegi
before he took on the name ... Stalin.

His “friends” still called him Koba
in their letter exchanges, (at least
before he had most of them shot).

Look Koba up on your search engines

sorry (not sorry) but John is far from his demise

Huan Yi
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4 posted 2009-03-02 08:39 PM


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Thank you Helen

Your light warms me
this cold night.

John

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PS  I'm not that smart.

Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2009-03-02 08:44 PM


Oh, if Stalin said it, it must be all right.

Bobby

gilead
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6 posted 2009-03-02 08:51 PM


Takes me back to Chairman Mao---"Power flows from the barrel of a gun." But what is that power? To end things, I suppose, even a universe. Alas, this poem illumines the darkness, and makes it shine.I think, in my limited way, I understand this poem's meaning.

art

Robert E. Jordan
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7 posted 2009-03-02 09:14 PM


Yo, Chairman Mao and Stalin--nice guys.

Any other words of wisdom from the boys?

Bobby

gilead
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8 posted 2009-03-02 10:17 PM


I think that Bones understands my utter disdain for the likes of those brutes of men whose power is derived from the suppression of the human desire to fly free like eagles on the most cheerful of winds.

art

turtle
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9 posted 2009-03-02 10:59 PM


Sorry folks,

It's not a matter of who the poem is about.
It's about this site's policies. Though it is not
up to me to enforce those policies......

I say, why push them?
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[This message has been edited by turtle (03-03-2009 01:56 AM).]

Robert E. Jordan
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10 posted 2009-03-03 08:05 AM


Yo Turtle,

I hope you don't think I was making a personal attack on Chairman Mao and Stalin?  Geez, I'd lose all standing in the party.

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (03-03-2009 08:44 AM).]

turtle
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11 posted 2009-03-03 09:09 AM



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