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peter griffin
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0 posted 2009-03-01 07:47 PM


A Short Conversation

Hello.
     hello.
Who are you?
     i am you.
Who am I?
     you are me,
     we are one,
     we are three,
     do you see?
I do not,
I thought we were two.
     not two, but one and three.
Well then where is he?
     who might that be?
The third part of me.
     that is the key.
I do not understand.
     if you did you would be.

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turtle
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since 2009-01-23
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Harbor
1 posted 2009-03-03 05:52 PM


Hi peter,

If you understood you would be one of three?


Sort of like a trilogy I'd guess....


turtle

tao power
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since 2009-02-24
Posts 109

2 posted 2009-03-04 02:30 PM


i don't get it.  sorry.
Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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3 posted 2009-03-04 03:12 PM


And who is she?
How could that be,
I just don't see...
Oh! That's one on me.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

peter griffin
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4 posted 2009-03-04 05:06 PM


The ancient mysteries taught of a trinity of body, mind and spirit as the make up of humans (also the origin of the Catholic Holy Trinity of father (mind), son (body) and holy ghost (spirit), my interpretation).  This is a conversation between the body and the mind, the mind, accessing information deep in the subconscious, is alluding to the finding of the spirit and the completeness that comes with that.
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2009-03-05 03:55 PM


The three of me honours the three of you and the three of us.

Namaste

~ The Divine in me honours the Divine in you,
EA

Sunshine
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6 posted 2009-03-05 07:14 PM


Ack! I love this...

especially when I hear me talking to I,
and void filling the id...



Well done!

P.S. I responded before I read the responses...



Margherita
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Eternity
7 posted 2009-03-05 07:17 PM


Enjoyed this much!

Love,
Margherita

zaxby
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8 posted 2009-03-05 07:37 PM


Who's on first! fun poem
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