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secretlife
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since 2002-07-30
Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,

0 posted 2009-03-01 01:29 PM



Coming back after losing my life
lost everything....but not anything

no love to define
no friend to be remind


coming back here with my old poems
after 8 years cant believe i am still a live..


i am a live without a soul...
i am weak couldn't find a moon..


coming back trying to heal my self
through these poems which i left and will keep...


coming back

You Are My End Secret Life...
Be Sure That I Can Be always With You...
Through The Distances...
Through Life Troubles...
Me And You are One...

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-03-01 01:46 PM


Welcome back! You are alive and I suggest you trust that your soul is the one thing that will never abandon you. The sooner you realize this the better.

Every new day is a new beginning.

Coming in here to enhance healing was a great idea.

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2009-03-02 01:16 PM


Welcome back and welcome to Passions.
          Ida

secretlife
Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,
3 posted 2009-03-04 01:26 PM


thank you all for your kind comments...

hugsss

tao power
Member
since 2009-02-24
Posts 109

4 posted 2009-03-06 01:55 AM


"alive" is one word.  this poem is pedestrian.  The emotion of it is raw and powerful though, and that's something, anyway.

Don't let them fool you.  It's far too easy to lose your soul these days.

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