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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2009-03-01 10:03 AM




(Cassiopeia - Nasa picture)

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cosmic void pulses

soul antenna captures signs

creative force flows


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© Copyright 2009 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2009-03-01 01:10 PM


Yo dear Margherita,

This is a lovely picture/poem combination.

I like it.

Love Bobby

ethome
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2 posted 2009-03-01 01:13 PM


Hey Margherita

This is just a super example of economy of content with a lot of meaning....Very good!

Love this phrase..."soul antenna"...Oh, man, that's as cool as it gets.

Eric

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2009-03-01 01:22 PM


What a beautiful picture/poem combination, Margharita, One feels the spiritual energy from both.
                                 Ida

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2009-03-01 02:14 PM


Margherita - words to go with the photo are great. Nice write...

BC

Honeybunch
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5 posted 2009-03-01 02:53 PM


Stunning, Margherita - both picture and words.  I'd like to say I've heard "the pulse" but I won't for fear of being... ridiculed.  

Love
Helen

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2009-03-01 03:27 PM


In any language spoken, a prayer is in its stunning beauty, still a prayer.

Lovely combination of utility and grace.

gilead
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7 posted 2009-03-01 03:37 PM


A poem and an mage of breathtaking beauty after own heart! I like to think I am in tune with the universe, and this poem draws me ever neigh.

A most lovely work, Margherita,

art


Earth Angel
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8 posted 2009-03-01 03:51 PM


Maga Margherita, that looks like a cosmic eye! ~ Perhaps it is God looking at us!


Angelo Terrestre

vandana
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9 posted 2009-03-01 06:46 PM


enjoyed
LindsayP
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10 posted 2009-03-01 08:57 PM



Dear Margherita, that is a beautiful

picture with words to match, a great post my dear. Love

Lindsay

2islander2
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11 posted 2009-03-03 04:30 PM


Hi Margherita

I love both the photo (étonnante et magnifique) and the haiku with its thoughts.

have a roman night (smiles)it is 22h30

yann

Margherita
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12 posted 2009-03-03 06:26 PM


Thank you all, my dear Poet friends. Your most kind replies brought joy.

Yes, dear Yann, it's over midnight, high time to sleep! Bonne nuit!

Love,
Margherita

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