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viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-02-28 11:34 PM



An angel perched
on each eyelid,
they spread their wings.

Unveiling
miniature suns,
brighter than normal.

Burning with hope.
Burning with interest.
Burning with beauty.

An angel perched
in the kitchen,
making pasta for two.

I've seen her
open her eyes.
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The Sadie Series.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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1 posted 2009-02-28 11:38 PM


aww these poems for Sadie are so wicked sweet dude I am enjoying them!
viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.
2 posted 2009-02-28 11:49 PM


It looks like I've won you as a follower of the series. My dear SEA, thank you very much. You're the bomb-diggity.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2009-03-01 01:42 PM


quote:
Unveiling
miniature suns,
brighter than normal.



The intimacy with Angels is such a delight, isn't it, especially when they spread such light and cook pasta for two too!

Really captivating!

Love,
Margherita

viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.
4 posted 2009-03-01 03:55 PM


Fanksh, Marguhreetski. always good to have you as a reader.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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5 posted 2009-03-01 05:30 PM


this was tasty and heavenly all at once
viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.
6 posted 2009-03-01 06:37 PM


Fanksh IG.


-P

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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