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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2009-02-28 12:59 PM


Fatootin In The Park

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Mysteria
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1 posted 2009-02-28 01:41 PM


I remember this from the previous post, but it is so much cuter with the pictures.  I want a Meerkat so badly, but my family thinks I am absolutely crazy.  I love those things, and watch them on their show all the time.   
Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2009-02-28 05:30 PM


Yo Bill,

We don't have those animals here in Philly.  Of course we don't have cobras here either.

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (02-28-2009 10:19 PM).]

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3 posted 2009-02-28 05:39 PM


that's too cute!!!

they are adorable, and I would have taken another route at that point lol

ethome
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4 posted 2009-02-28 05:57 PM


Just fatootin in the park
Holdin you close in the dark...

Furry critters...I think it's just too cute Bill and you did it all up perfectly.

Gotta get me one of them books so I'm cool like you and know all that stuff.

Eric

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5 posted 2009-02-28 09:17 PM


I also love meercats. Love this ditty and those pictures.

Latearrival

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2009-02-28 10:36 PM


Mysteria - decided to re-write this one, and then post it with a photo. It really does make a difference. I wanted a Meercat also, but did some reading on them. Seems they can get somewhat mean, but I wonder. Thanks for the reply...

BC

Bobby - Yes, there are meercats in Philly, seen a couple of cobras there also, h'aaaa, just kidding. Thanks for your reply...

SEA - they are really cutie's for sure. Nice of you to stop by for a read...

ethome - thought I'd do something a little different and this one is a re-write. Loved doing it. Thanks for the comments...

latearrival - they are sure cute little critters. Had a good time putting this one together. Thanks for your reply...

BC

LindsayP
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7 posted 2009-02-28 10:55 PM




That is one cute poem Bill about some cute little animals. My wife and I saw quite a few of them when we were on Safari in Tanzania. They were one of our favourites
in their size range. always interesting.

viking_metal
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8 posted 2009-02-28 11:58 PM


Dear BC,

Meerkats are sweet. Great write too.

-P

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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9 posted 2009-03-01 11:20 AM


Dear Bill, love is your top theme and I enjoyed this cute write very much. All beings have a right to perform their love game under the full moon, I would say.

Such a sweet picture to go with it!

Love,
Margherita


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10 posted 2009-03-01 11:42 AM


LOL, this is cute, Bill. Meerkats are cool!
'Fatootin' is a funny word, and you did it justice with this photo and write.

Bill Charles
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11 posted 2009-03-01 12:58 PM


Lindsay - yes indeed, they sure are cute little critters. The safari in Tanzania must have been something. Thanks for the reply...

viking-metal - appreciate the comments...

Margherita - ah yes, they sure do have the right, just that I ran into them, h'aaaaa. Thanks for your comments...

Midnitesun - cool little critters they are, had a great time writing this one. 'Fatootin' is a word from the Dictionarious, been adding to it for a while. Thanks for stopping by, and for the reply...

BC

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12 posted 2009-03-02 09:50 PM


Bill

   Thanks, for the Fatootin in The Park,I got a good laugh.

gilead
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13 posted 2009-03-02 11:08 PM


I play the guitar, Bill, Bach, blues, and country, but that's not the point---this is just cool!

Love it!

art

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14 posted 2009-03-03 08:45 AM


Love is Love isn't it?

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15 posted 2009-03-03 09:33 AM


I never knew that a meerkat could play the guitar! It's no wonder that you wanted to write about them! ~ and might I say that you did a mighty adorable job of doing so!

I've heard of "Muskrat Love" and now I've been introduced to "Meerkat Love"! Love is beautiful in all its forms!


Linda

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16 posted 2009-03-03 10:56 AM


what a delightful read this morning! Thanks Bill!

reminds me of the ferrets I had at one time

funny little creatures


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17 posted 2009-03-03 02:30 PM


Hi Bill; I definitely love your poetry.

yann

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18 posted 2009-03-03 03:22 PM


AWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

I love this


ARCTIC WIND

Bill Charles
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19 posted 2009-03-03 04:26 PM


Sharon Rose - Glad you enjoyed this little write. Had a good time writing it...

gilead - I'd love to hear you play your guitar. I'm somewhat of an amateur, but manage to get by. Thanks for the reply...

Michele - yes, Love is Love, always...

Linda - my little meerkat in the photo learned to play the guitar, taught him when out in the desert. A'hhhh, to love, what else makes the heart go round...

passing shadows - these little furry critters are just funny.

yann - you're most kind with your thoughts, appreciate it...

Artic Wind - thank you, appreciate you coming by and for the reply...

BC

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20 posted 2009-03-06 03:52 PM


The only problem with the photo is that I love meerkats so much I forgot to read for a moment or two! LOL

But read I did... and enjoyed a lot. *S*

sunnyh
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21 posted 2009-03-06 04:16 PM


Hello my friend...
   I enjoyed reading you once again.  It's been very long time...are you still the Gypsy King?  HA!  Anyway, this was wonderful, and so like the Bill I remember!!

SunnyH

Bill Charles
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22 posted 2009-03-06 10:25 PM


suthern - I'm glad you liked this write, and meerkats, as Part II is coming soon...

sunnyh - out of the past comes my favorite lady, the Gyspsy Queen. So good to see you again, and hope you're doing well...

BC

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