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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-02-27 07:45 AM



something about friendship
and how it rolls off your lips
like a bubblegum bubbles playing
waiting to be bitten and popped

and I guess you read my eyes
on the love tag on your shirt
since you put it where you did
knowing I would be looking there

you talked about the other men around
and how they always came up short
when the length of stay mattered more
than the length of hungry did

but then you looked up into my eyes
and you said something under your breath
and walked a bit faster as if to get away
in case some stranger threw maybe water

from a bucket that never would run dry


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I walked faster so you would chase me
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2 posted 2009-02-27 12:19 PM


ms suesea...

oh and when I do!!  thanks babe

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3 posted 2009-02-28 01:03 AM


Oh, how I love a magic bucket!  And how I love how you express yourself - magic words too.  Now for a few magic beans and the world would be perfect.

A

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4 posted 2009-02-28 05:13 AM


quote:
but then you looked up into my eyes
and you said something under your breath
and walked a bit faster as if to get away
in case some stranger threw maybe water

from a bucket that never would run dry




Smiles and admiration for your enticing creativity.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2009-02-28 06:21 AM


ms ali-san..pleeeeeeeeeaze..don't eat the beans..thanks babe


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ms mar, thanks lady friend for your special touch

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
6 posted 2009-02-28 09:11 PM


Kin I put 'em in my ears or some other place?
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7 posted 2009-03-03 11:09 PM


"and I guess you read my eyes
on the love tag on your shirt
since you put it where you did
knowing I would be looking there"


hmmmm......nice write

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2009-03-04 07:28 AM


ms ali-san..come here and let me help you with that..


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steavenr, thanks guy

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9 posted 2009-03-04 02:07 PM


Chomping away on your big bubble magic
slurp.....slurp

Pilgrimage
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10 posted 2009-03-04 03:00 PM


I walked away faster so you could watch me quicker. Hope you enjoyed the view.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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11 posted 2009-03-04 03:51 PM


when the length of stay mattered more
than the length of hungry did


Mmmmmmmm... that's all I can say.

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12 posted 2009-03-04 04:00 PM


ms inky..you are so bad in all of the good ways, thanks babe


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ms nan, the view is always lovely, thanks for your eyes too


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ms indi, did I not quote it accurately?
reading your mind was not always easy when you were shaking your head that way..  thanks babe

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