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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-02-26 08:16 AM



a bit like slot machine catholicism
your handles were made for worship
and I could never buy a prettier
that had a finer thirty on

you wore your carrera like jewelry
then long legged me out of a bronco
I guess it was that no lipstick seduction
that made me erase the other kisses

and just want to pick your pockets
to steal any secrets you had hidden
but then you saw where I would put them
and were quicker with your fingers

then I was to slap your hands
so we just walked in the sun sometimes
and let each other's eyes do the talking
reminiscing about the maybe places ahead

and almost blushing about the dream times


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daark (forbidden)


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1 posted 2009-02-26 08:57 AM


"and let each other's eyes do the talking
reminiscing about the maybe places ahead"

light and easy...

very nice

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2009-02-26 10:02 AM


thanks suesea...:
Indigo
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3 posted 2009-02-26 05:55 PM


so wind-burned and chapped,
rich girl highways always leave
his lips wanting more.

Indigo

ethome
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4 posted 2009-02-26 06:13 PM


Don't blush Dark.

You haven't reached those cool love places just ahead. You wouldn't want her to think she was breaking in a rookie would you.....or....would you?

Love the way you put ideas down in words man.

Eric

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5 posted 2009-02-27 12:44 PM


magic...simply magic...didn't even need to look at the byline to know whose work this one was...it is so you...masterfully magic...nice touch
Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2009-02-27 07:28 AM


ms indi..

somthing about rincon and the seawinds really dry the smile out eh? thanks babe

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eric, thanks guy, hey I blushed once..think it was back in 63 and I walked in on a..well anyway..thanks guy.

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steavenr, humble thanks amigo

Callista
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7 posted 2009-02-28 12:02 PM


I love sublety. You are the master.

"The Moving Finger writes, and, having writ,
Moves on: nor all thy Piety nor Wit
Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line.."

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8 posted 2009-02-28 12:59 PM


Yes, you are the master of weaving words in the most poetic manner - carrying a message in a whisper that hits its mark.

A

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2009-02-28 06:27 AM


Callista, humble thanks my friend
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ms ali-san, thanks babe

Margherita
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10 posted 2009-03-01 02:05 PM


quote:
you wore your carrera like jewelry
then long legged me out of a bronco
I guess it was that no lipstick seduction
that made me erase the other kisses




Some jewelry!! I had to look up "bronco" ... and was reminded of one such giant "thing" with which I went through the woods with a cousin, because I still carry a sign on my knee for not having calculated well the distance between the ground and the ... well you know what I mean! Long legs are a must I guess!

As always a treat!

Love,
Margherita


inkedgoddess
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11 posted 2009-03-01 04:33 PM


your chopstick, or chapstick
you sizzle in my swizzle
and blush me in pretty pink pout

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2009-03-04 07:02 PM


A pleasure to read...James
Dark Stranger
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13 posted 2009-03-05 07:50 AM


ms mar..the bronco here is a ford bronco like the OJ bronco that was famous once...thanks lady friend.

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ms inki..you do such naughty things with words and my thoughts..please continue, thanks

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thanks James..much appreciated

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