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Michael G
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0 posted 2009-02-25 11:20 PM



You told me secrets that broke open
my soul to the winds that take me to
your arms. Your eyes tell me more
than any single thought you utter
to me. Funny how love is when working
against all other forces of nature.
Yet as you touch my face, caress
my back, bring me close to you
I fall down and cry as the happiness
overwhelms my core. One step,
one small moment, and patience
beyond all things. We have been
broken and now must heal. Love
is that healing force as the wind
is to the lands.

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1 posted 2009-02-25 11:25 PM


this is very intimate, and tender
ethome
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2 posted 2009-02-25 11:32 PM


Love with some conflict always makes it stronger.
Lovely write.
I really liked this line...
"Funny how love is when working
against all other forces of nature."

Ain't it the truth.

Eric

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3 posted 2009-02-26 08:31 AM


What a superbly written tender heart-write.
Raindance
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4 posted 2009-02-26 09:27 AM


Love is that healing force, indeed.
Lovely write.

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