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WHISPERS
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA 
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WHISPERS Whispers, just whispers, was it the wind, Sweet breezes blow by me, where has she been, Memories, fond memories, chased by the pain, Voices that whisper she’s gone, again. Lonely, just lonely, left all alone, Moonlit shadows, heart turns to stone, Sorrows, deep sorrows, burden the soul, Regret and despair, claim their toll. A moment, one moment, what did I hear? Was it the wind, whisper she’s near? Falling, I’m falling, into the past, She’ll not return forever, at last. Leaving, I’m leaving, time to move on, Misty last memories, I’m finally done. Breezes, sweet breezes, on new morning dew, The wind carries her whispers, "I’ll always love you". The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo WT, These couplets work well for you. The poem is very well done. Bobby |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a beautiful and so romantic poem. I love it. Hugs, Ethel Ethels Love Poetry My SpiritIsUp Poetry Shelf Powered by CGISpy.com |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*dang* how sad  |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
WTB - I love the resolve that even when love is lost but remembered, there comes a whisper from somewhere to move on. Very nicely crafted with a beat of its own. Namyh |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Your're a great poet WTB and I love the way you write. Keep them coming my friend. Take care Lindsay |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hard to escape the whispers WT. Lovely twists and turns of heart thoughts here. It can be such a struggle sometimes as you portray so well. Eric |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I always enjoy your writing WT, Good one. Ida |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Thank you all so very much for your kind comments. I was trying to post a picture with this, but my computer didn't see things the way I did. Go figure. I will try again soon. Thanks for stopping in and saying hi. Love ya all. Tracey. |
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