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viking_metal
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0 posted 2009-02-25 02:07 PM




"Of course I love the science museum!"

Perhaps
I can arrange
some sort of t-rex skeleton attack.

I can fight
to the finish,
and save the day,
complete with neat one-liner .

We could
take some pictures,
and walk back to the car.

Where you won't ask me
to take you home.


_____________________________________
The Sadie Series.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

[This message has been edited by viking_metal (02-25-2009 04:14 PM).]

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1 posted 2009-02-25 04:14 PM


museums are fun
the last time I went I got to see a Titanic exhibit! That, was wicked cool.

your Sadie is a lucky girl

viking_metal
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2 posted 2009-02-25 04:23 PM


Not mine just yet, but I'm doing my best. We'll see what happens.

Thanks very much, dear SEA.


-P

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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3 posted 2009-02-25 04:27 PM


she would be a fool not to be
viking_metal
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4 posted 2009-02-25 04:47 PM


I agree. My butt is super nice.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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5 posted 2009-02-25 04:48 PM


ROFL you rock dude
ethome
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6 posted 2009-02-25 06:26 PM


Aw c'mon it wasn't that bad. She should let you take her home.....
Did you have a cape on? Maybe that's where you screwed up.
Just tryin to help. I suppose that was pre cape era.
Listen could you let me in on the one liner, I might need it later.....I promise I won't tell a soul...

Good luck with her. She'll just have to come back, she won't be able to help herself.

Eric

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7 posted 2009-02-25 06:47 PM


Yo Paul,

I liked this poem very much.  This sounds just about right.

I love those old bones too.

Bobby

viking_metal
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8 posted 2009-02-26 12:58 PM


Ethome... Thanks dude. Sorry, one liners are kept secret. The Idea of this was that she didn't want me to take her home yet, and that she wanted to be with me longer. Maybe hit up a "scenic overlook."

Bobby... Thanks bud. I love the science museum, and so does she. Let's hope I get to fight a T-rex skeleton, and win. That'd be bound to win her over.

-P

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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9 posted 2009-02-26 01:18 AM


I bet after you kill the skeleton, you grab the girl in your arms and fix her with a smoldering gaze.  With a cool smile you say "don't worry baby.  i left that dino sore" or "looks like he got t-wrecked!" or maybe even "I'm going to go cenezoic on your ass"

Good luck.

nice poem.

viking_metal
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10 posted 2009-02-26 01:27 AM


Haha, thanks tao. I actually thought of the t-wrecked one when I was writing this... :O


-P

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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