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garysgirl
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0 posted 2009-02-25 12:19 PM



Photo By Ethel_GG

~*~
As down the path of life we walk
Our mark upon this world making
Our steps may not be what we always want
Some make dreams, others our heart breaking
*
But when the end of life comes about
And we have no more breath to take
The impression we have made upon this world
Is left there where nothing can break
*
Some of our loved ones and friends we meet
Will know us from the inside out
Others will know only what we want them to
Not really what we are all about
*
But if upon this earth we happen to meet
Someone we allow inside our heart
Someone with whom we share all ourselves
A someone we hope will never ever part
*
We should consider ourselves truly blessed
This person if we have ever found
Because we know that with someone in our life
Our inner beings and hearts have truly been bound
~*~

© Copyright 2009 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2009-02-25 12:36 PM


May I be the first to say Welcome back...

Nice to read your wonderful words of joy

SEA
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2 posted 2009-02-25 01:15 PM


*
Some of our loved ones and friends we meet
Will know us from the inside out
Others will know only what we want them to
Not really what we are all about
*
for sure!

so good to get to read you again

LeeJ
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3 posted 2009-02-25 02:29 PM


Some of our loved ones and friends we meet
Will know us from the inside out
Others will know only what we want them to
Not really what we are all about


a very aware and happy song

love is....

beautifully written

garysgirl
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4 posted 2009-02-25 03:20 PM


Thanks Michelle, Susan, and LeeJ for reading
and for your comments. It's good to be on PIP again.
Don't know why I stay gone so long. I really
do miss you all when I'm not here.
Hugs,
Ethel
Some of my poetry links--

Ethels Creations  My Inspirational Pages
Ethels Heart Poems  
Ethels Love Poetry
   My SpiritIsUp Poetry Shelf



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Mark Bohannan
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5 posted 2009-02-25 05:42 PM


It is easy to read your words and know your heart just by the way you see and understand things and this shows just how wonderful a heart you have.  Nice to read your words again and I for one understand how easy it is for life to take us away for so long.  Enjoyed this piece very much.
Margherita
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6 posted 2009-02-25 06:03 PM


Dear Ethel, you have written a very beautiful, insightful poem here and I fully agree with your considerations.
Always it is such a joy to read you here on the blue pages, you are part of Pip and you have left your heartprints over the years. Please stay!!
Wonderful picture too, brava!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
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7 posted 2009-02-25 06:10 PM


Yo dear Garysgirl,

You have some lovely quatrains here in this poem.  I like it a lot.

Love Bobby

ethome
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8 posted 2009-02-25 06:16 PM


I haven't read your work for a long time. However, I have been away for a while.

I like this..

"But if upon this earth we happen to meet
Someone we allow inside our heart
Someone with whom we share all ourselves
A someone we hope will never ever part
*
We should consider ourselves truly blessed
This person if we have ever found
Because we know that with someone in our life
Our inner beings and hearts have truly been bound"

Too true and so very nicely expressed!

Eric

LindsayP
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9 posted 2009-02-25 10:25 PM



That is such a delightful poem to share

with us all dear Ethel, Thanks for sharing.

Lindsay

Bill Charles
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10 posted 2009-02-25 10:53 PM


garysgirl - nice to read your writing once again. So true about the one special person, and a true love way of projecting it in this write...

BC

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2009-02-27 12:55 PM


Ethel Mae!!! My gosh, girl, don't be such a stranger! You and your poetry sure have been missed by yours truly!!! ~ and this lovely poem is a perfect illustration as to why!

"Some of our loved ones and friends we meet
Will know us from the inside out
Others will know only what we want them to
Not really what we are all about"

~ Well, m'dear, I personally like what I've learned about your insides through reading your poetry over the years!

Giving you a humongous hug! ~ and a smiley face,
Linda Lou

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