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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-02-25 07:36 AM



I guess it is when you have my hands on
and my eyes too
and you leave everything else there
in your lady place closet

when we listen to secret place music
and you let my mind dance
with the woman of you
in our cove of maybe someday colors

you say they fit you better than your own
when the touches and glances
fit the wanting more of your shoulders
and the take me higher of your toes

and I say I don't mind your keeping them too
if you would want to leave yours behind
as something I could wear on special occasion
like those waking moments between eye blinks

when anything else would seem just to casual
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1 posted 2009-02-25 08:32 AM


good morning mister

you make me want to dance....


Raindance
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2 posted 2009-02-25 09:04 AM


This is one delicious write to read
over and over.

I especially like:
"when the touches and glances
fit the wanting more of your shoulders"

deliciously creative...

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2009-02-25 09:23 AM


ms suesea, thanks babe!!  Save me a slow one?


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raindance, thanks so much for the read and comments

Indigo
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4 posted 2009-02-25 03:38 PM


barefoot, dancing wild
to Sly and the Family Stone
yeah, take me higher.

Indigo

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5 posted 2009-02-25 03:45 PM


you say they fit you better than your own
when the touches and glances
fit the wanting more of your shoulders
and the take me higher of your toes


This is so beautiful!!
Hugs,
Ethel

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2009-02-25 03:50 PM


ms indi...you are just the right height now babe..thanks for the smile


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ms Ethel, thanks to you for the touch and smile here

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7 posted 2009-02-28 01:08 AM


Mind dances can be so erotic when shared with the right poet.  Wanna tango with me?

A

ethome
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8 posted 2009-02-28 03:35 AM


Good God Dark!

I hope you're talking about sunglasses....LOL!

Loved the twists and turns in this erotic piece.

Eric

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2009-02-28 04:04 AM


Eric... I don't think he is talking sunglasses here!

Mr Daark... just wonderful!

love and hugs RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2009-02-28 06:23 AM


ms ali-san, thanks babe..long as we dance in the earthquake machine I am good with it

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eric...thanks guy...


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ms r&b thanks lady

Margherita
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11 posted 2009-03-01 11:14 AM


quote:
when we listen to secret place music
and you let my mind dance
with the woman of you
in our cove of maybe someday colors



Pure delight! Mind dancing is a great exercise of anticipation, indeed.

Love,
Margherita

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