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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2009-02-25 12:08 PM


You Don't Love me

I don't know how many times
That those words spilled from my mouth

Or the four years I've waited
To be in you arms again
In the end was for nothing

All I know is I'm still here
And you don't even love me
Enough to let go of me


[Ok this guy either needs to quit starring at me, leave me alone, befriend  me, or just tell me how he feels.  It is so hard to get over someone when they pull that...]

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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Marc-Andre
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1 posted 2009-02-25 03:49 AM


Juju, the last three lines are truly impressive, they make one pause and think. Quite a paradoxical truth you have unearthed here. I can empathise with you on that one. Have a marvelous day!

Mark

Raindance
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2 posted 2009-02-25 09:08 AM


I agree, those last three lines are impressive!  
And I think there's a message in there...

viking_metal
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3 posted 2009-02-25 11:10 AM


You talk to him. Guys get nervous too.


-P

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

garysgirl
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4 posted 2009-02-25 11:32 AM


Very heartfelt thoughts you have written.
Hope things work out for the best for you.
Hugs,
Ethel
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Juju
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5 posted 2009-02-25 11:46 AM


Vikings metal - I would if he didn't have a gf.  At this point I am irritated and want him to go away he isn't interested in dating me.  The dude like hasn't said a word in four years.  

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Windhover
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since 2003-11-17
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6 posted 2009-02-25 05:03 PM


Time to kick this one into the touchline, Milady... Some of us men just don't seem to get the message...
(mainly because we seem to care more about ourselves, than we do about the Lady.)

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