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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2009-02-24 01:10 PM

like words to song
compose yourself
gossamer and white lace
serenade
tempting, heart, desire
.... keeping of souls

willful delicacies

bare not solemn innocense
rather it to cascade
mingle, in flow
virture and grace
allow to fall
.... arms await

expressive tastes

bouquet the senses
heighten each moment
complete the chest
with hope-filled memories
ever shimmering,
forever loving,
never wearing

In rhythms to a rise the days shall follow ... each Yesterday, each Tomorrow. - Ct/05

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2009-02-24 01:29 PM

What a great title for this poem, that I really enjoyed.

tao power
Member

since 2009-02-24

Posts 109

2 posted 2009-02-24 01:49 PM

I like this poem alot, It's about a new bride, correct? You never come out and say so, but you make it quite apparent. I respect that ability, to illuminate an idea without beating people over the head with it. Do you know what I mean? This poem is powerful subtlety.

I think you might have spelling errors, but who cares? Just thought you might want to clean it up is all. Good work.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2009-02-24 02:29 PM

a most gracious poem of deep sensitivity to
the feeling of beginnings in many ways

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2009-02-24 02:41 PM

Very nicely done, Craig. It's good to rad you again.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2009-02-24 05:13 PM

"bouquet the senses
heighten each moment
complete the chest
with hope-filled memories
ever shimmering,
forever loving,
never wearing "

smiling, remembering back when

always a pleasure to read you again, hoping you are well

M

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2009-02-25 10:44 AM

Very lovely display of emotions linked to a special moment in time.

Love,
Margherita

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