To Margherita, a Birthday poem

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poddarku
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since 2008-01-15

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india

0 posted 2009-02-24 06:08 AM

To Margherita, birthday poem
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I brought a birthday bird.
Though birthday means
changing one cage for another;
I brought the bird to be freed
forever.
And God was meant to bless her
for this act of kindeness.
“So where is it?” she asked me.
I opened my heart.
She could hear the batting wings.
=© 2009 - All Rights Reserved Kushal Poddar

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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

1 posted 2009-02-24 06:52 AM

Oh, this is very very nice!

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2009-02-24 10:51 AM

it is short, beautiful and brilliant,

thanks

yann

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2009-02-24 11:25 AM

A beautiful poem for a lovely lady, Ku.
ida

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2009-02-24 11:58 AM

quote:
I brought a birthday bird.
Though birthday means
changing one cage for another;
I brought the bird to be freed
forever.
And God was meant to bless her
for this act of kindness.
“So where is it?” she asked me.
I opened my heart.
She could hear the batting wings.

Dear dear Kushal, I am speechless for the emotion. You move me to tears with this precious gift. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. I will forever cherish this unique gem.

I can hear the batting wings, from the vastness of your heart which symbolizes caring and freedom, the echoes resound within my own heart.

In only just a few lines you have touched many significant themes, like freedom, love, transcendence, kindness and beauty. In a way that touches deeply.

(((((Kushal)))))
Much love and hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

5 posted 2009-02-24 12:18 PM

Yes, yes, yes, yes, YESSSSSS!!!!

What an absolutely beautiful poem, inside and out, Kushal, for a beautiful lady, inside and out!

Thank you for honouring Margherita in this everything-she-said-above poem!

Owl

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

6 posted 2009-02-24 12:29 PM

poddarku, I love this, for it shows you know her heart in depth.
latearrial

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2009-02-25 10:40 AM

Enjoying this again and doing what I forgot to do: save it!

Thank you again, it is really wonderful.

Love,
Margherita

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2009-02-25 11:45 AM

Such a beautiful and true poem for such a
truly special and wonderful lady.
Hugs,
Ethel
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Ethels Creations My Inspirational PagesEthels Heart Poems
Ethels Love Poetry My SpiritIsUp Poetry Shelf

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

9 posted 2009-02-28 05:34 AM

oh dear Kushal.. this is very special for our dear, sweet, loving Margherita... thank you!!!!!