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Karma |
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illuminated truth Junior Member
since 2009-02-16
Posts 20 |
When you told me you loved me, I now know that was untrue. But if I knew then what I know now, I would've had a clue. I wish I were a bird, so I could fly over and poo on you. Because you and your attitude stink like phew! You make me so sick, worst than a flu. It's crazy because somehow I still love you Like you have cast a spell on me with voodoo Time and time again you have been the driver and its me you like to screw But guess what? The games you like to play are over and through I can't believe how you treated me, after everything I've done for you You owe me like rent that's past due Forget about how clear HD is, you should see my view Thanks to you, the old me had died and here comes the new After a lot of preparation she is ready to make her debut I hope I get amnesia so I can forget the you that I once knew But I know I can't forget because you will forever be attached to my heart like glue I guess you are just doing to me what I used to do to boys too Break their hearts and leave them blue So what people say about karma is true What you do to others comes back on you times two |
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tao power Member
since 2009-02-24
Posts 109 |
I like this poem. Was this a first draft? It seems like you could have tightened it up more, but still. it was pretty good. |
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illuminated truth Junior Member
since 2009-02-16
Posts 20 |
Thanks. An yeah it was a first draft, actually the only draft. i wrote it in like 15 minutes. |
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