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Dance In The Rain
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Dance In The Rain |
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Paul D. Hennigan Member
since 2009-02-03
Posts 52Texas USA |
A rolling sound of thunder echoes from your soul Storm clouds on the horizon so dark and cold Stillness surrounds you, yet you expect turbulent winds The gale that can sink a fleet, or cause a world to end You clutch the life jacket called love and dearly hold Yet wonder if anyone is aware of the pain deep in your soul You hide it so well with a mask of sunshine painted on your face But plod through life hid in your work, never losing faith You've marched to a different drum beat as you daily live With so much love and passion you were willing to give Lovely you are, and many have yearned for your touch But all your attributes, like an unused book gather dust Your frailty from burdens you bear, loom heavy on your mind Break down walls that surround your heart, stay gentle and kind Send all your problems on heavens high wire, and remember my name When woes of life deluge your soul, dance with me in the rain |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awwww....can't tell you how much I LOVE this!! I'm going to save this one.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
To dance in the rain is a favorite dream of mine ... (and a few times I did realize the dream). I was attracted by the title and what I found makes me want to ask a question ... are you a clairvoyant?  Ok, I am barefoot and ready .... Powerful write, it does show great sensitivity. Love, Margherita |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Lovely -Juju |
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tao power Member
since 2009-02-24
Posts 109 |
this was a truly sweet poem. i'd take this poem over most of the so called "masters" any day. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Joining hands with Margherita and dancing in the rain with you. lovely, latearrival |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Paul - I've danced in a warm southern rain, and it's just grand. Hard to describe it, but you have in this writing... BC |
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Blood.Wolf Member
since 2009-02-09
Posts 54GA, USA |
Beautiful poem. I, too, love the rain! |
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