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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2009-02-23 11:09 AM


The gorgeous Griselda
really has her hands full
with her beloved Bones.  

With a rib cage that’s long
and just won’t quit,
a six pack that’s strong
and rock hard solid
and big brown eyes
that would melt a heart of steel,
he’s quite the popular playground.

Bobby

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Juju
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In your dreams
1 posted 2009-02-23 11:24 AM


It is nice to see that she loves him.

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2009-02-23 12:10 PM


Thanks dear Juju,

Griselda and Bones adore each other.

Thanks for being kind enough to respond to my poem.

Love Bobby

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
3 posted 2009-02-25 12:18 PM


I don't waste my crushes on just anyone.  I knew he was a hottie!

A

ethome
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4 posted 2009-02-25 04:11 AM


That's a new twist Bobby and it brings up new and fresh images leaving the reader with anticipation for the next little chapter.....

Go Bobby!

Eric

Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2009-02-25 08:45 AM


Thanks dear Alison,

For the kind words on Bones person.

You know how it is, what you see is what you get.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2009-02-25 08:46 AM


Thanks Eric,

I'm pleased you enjoyed the image.

Bobby

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