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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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perhaps it was the timing of our hours or your pantyhose and my tree limb compatibility or maybe even climbing bare foot forever without assurance places for dreams to hold you knew it didn't matter much to me about the other man in his ownership shirt that you were constantly ripping the buttons off so you could breath just a little easier so I imagined your eyes on the new window rose and the smile you would model momentarily before looking around to see where god was and if he was noticing the change in your wanting or how some story made your woman feel unladylike and sometimes you enjoyed it more that way when you didn't have to dress up in pretend in order to pretend how things could be if I made your kisses melt like summer chocolate _______________ daark (forbidden) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"you knew it didn't matter much to me about the other man in his ownership shirt that you were constantly ripping the buttons off so you could breath just a little easier so I imagined your eyes on the new window rose and the smile you would model momentarily before looking around to see where god was and if he was noticing the change in your wanting or how some story made your woman feel unladylike and sometimes you enjoyed it more that way when you didn't have to dress up in pretend in order to pretend how things could be" make it hard to pick favorite lines why dontcha!  amazing D good morning  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Well ... oh ... sigh! Every line is enchanting on its own, but the last line really did it! Such kisses of rapture do exist, don't they? I do remember, sometime, somewhere ... You are so enticing, dear Poet D.! Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea...thanks babe..perhaps all of them will be your favorites _____________ ms mar, thanks lady friend for the touch and sweet tooth too |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
pretty much! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
do the silver wrappers blend with the chocolate when they melt? Enjoyed as always the perspective in shadows. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
mark.. I think they just scoot under and shimmer as the chocolate seduces..kind of like mirrors..thanks amigo |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
It's funny how often I look out my window after reading your poems or just those times when I look. Your words whisper just enough to ignite my thoughts. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks babe |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
those darn pantyhose are just meant to be ripped off by your big branch |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inky..I do love the sound of fabric succuming in submissive whispers to the jutting boldness of jagged protrusions..thanks babe |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
you knew it didn't matter much to me about the other man in his ownership shirt that you were constantly ripping the buttons off so you could breath just a little easier And those wearing such shirts always seem surprised when the caged escape to draw breath. This image kept drawing me back in an incredible work that flows so smoothly! *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern...thanks so much !! |
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Noel Junior Member
since 2009-03-06
Posts 42West Coast |
Provacative, sensual, sweet and sinful, and just a little bit sticky. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
noel..thank you |
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