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SlowlyFallAway
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0 posted 2009-05-29 05:16 PM


Mistake’s uninvited hangover greets content’s farewell
Striving to find the joy you thought once was so fond of you
Pleasure solemnly drags sobriety to the front line battle
Painted in red, written in blood
“On the way is what I’m doing.”

Emily Shives
5-29-09


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1 posted 2009-05-31 02:14 AM


"Striving to find the joy you thought once was so fond of you"

This line in particular, I love.

Enjoyed.

K

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2 posted 2009-05-31 09:43 AM


A window to the heart's
mirror each dawn brings,

Bloodline

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