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Open Poetry #44
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Monk Frost I!
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since 2008-06-15
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0 posted 2009-02-22 09:22 PM

Lost of thy past are thee
Blinded by thy ego of thou
Foward unto the future
Lower thy brow
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Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2009-02-23 06:52 PM

Yo Monk Frost I!,

I love the last line of this poem.  Keep up the good work.

Bobby
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