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Through These Moments
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Through These Moments |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Through Those Moments So long Can we hold a moment So long How can we smile? Through shinning dreams How can we hold? To the moment of love Where its time changing? Through the mist Where the sun hides the clouds away? Where the love was here? Where all the love stay for long? Time has changed Through the dusty storm Time has come to change the things That we want Can we smile through this moment We can't never find What we are seeking for? We may have real for happiness We may have the spirit of love That never ends So long How can we hold a moment? Through these moments |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very nicely done, Vandana. How to hold the love? It's a question many have asked, some have 'successfully' answered. I enjoyed reading these thoughts. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice indeed vandana. Questions to stimulate thinking. Love is a tricky thing and doesn't always trun out the way we want it to. Eric |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A very interesting post Vandana It makes one think. Lindsay |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
vandana - I agree with the replies, nice write... BC |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You ask some very important questions but I don't know that they really have an answer. I guess the best we can do is to love and hope that the love in return is strong enough to endure. Enjoyed the read and nice to see your name in here. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I like this, vandana. |
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