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Paul D. Hennigan
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0 posted 2009-02-21 04:49 PM



All the things i have written
All the words i could ever say
Will never describe my feelings
Of needing you in a special way

Feelings that shall remain eternal
My soul bound to you this way
The most precious small reminders
Of love extending beyond the grave

Time will be the foremost enemy
The world seemingly revolves so fast
Days turn swiftly into endless nights
Yet dreams still visit our past

Begone demons that send only pain
Whose heart you robbed of youthful bliss
Cradle me in your arms guardian angel
Grant me needed solace in your midst

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with you
1 posted 2009-02-21 04:52 PM


this is heart wrenching...such ache.

well done

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2 posted 2009-02-22 12:17 PM


Paul...Well done. Great poem, enjoyed very much your style...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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3 posted 2009-02-22 09:14 PM



Paul that is one great poem,

Well put together with good rhyming,

Top accolades my friend.

Lindsay

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4 posted 2009-02-23 11:42 AM


Enjoyed the flow and rhyme pattern much.  The poem reflects the definition of the title quite well.   Well done.
Paul D. Hennigan
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5 posted 2009-02-23 12:59 PM


Thanks so very much for the kind reviews as i am new to expressing myself in words of prose and appeciative we have a place to share.
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