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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2009-02-20 09:52 PM


They feel Bones doesn’t have a mind.
They feel Bones can’t really understand.
They feel Bones just doesn’t think.
They feel Bones doesn’t care.
They feel Bones can’t really feel pain.
They feel Bones can’t be hurt.
They feel Bones isn’t very deep.
They feel Bones isn’t very smart.
They feel Bones won’t tell anyone.
They feel Bones has no soul.
They feel Bones won’t remember.
They feel Bones has no one.
They feel Bones won’t hate them.
They feel Bones won’t talk.
They feel Bones doesn’t write.
They feel Bones will do as he’s told.
They feel Bones won’t hurt them.
They feel Bones.
They feel Bones.
They feel Bones.

Bobby

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viking_metal
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1 posted 2009-02-20 11:22 PM


Good stuff. I like writing in this format. It's pure.

I feel bones.


-P

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2009-02-20 11:32 PM


Bobby - I'm in wonderment who 'They' might be. Bones is Bones, good or bad, but still Bones. No one can ever take that away from him...

BC

gilead
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3 posted 2009-02-21 12:16 PM


Bottom line---they "think" they feel Bones, but don't have a clue, whether "they" are shrinks, or people on the streets who are trying to figure him out. Bones is Bones---no questions asked. That's my thought.

art

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4 posted 2009-02-21 12:30 PM


it's sad.

just really sad

ethome
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5 posted 2009-02-21 02:01 AM


They are definitely wrong about Bones. He sees more than the regular world ever sees.

Bones is tough but not hard!
Bones demise was purely sad......He may have been forced to be wise beyond his years but he still had a heart.

Eric

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2009-02-21 11:52 AM


Thanks Paul,

I'm pleased you like this format.

Thanks for feeling Bones.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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7 posted 2009-02-21 11:56 AM


Thanks Bill,

"They", are Bones villainous clients.  They don't care about Bones at all.  They only think of themselves.  Bones hates them.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2009-02-21 11:58 AM


Thanks Art,

What you say is very true.  No one ever got to Bones, and that's a fact.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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9 posted 2009-02-21 12:00 PM


Thanks dear SEA,

Yes, it was very sad.  Bones had a bad time of it.  There's no excuse for it.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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10 posted 2009-02-21 12:02 PM


Thanks Eric,

Yes, the Bones I remember always did have a big heart.  He was too generous.

Bobby

Juju
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11 posted 2009-02-22 12:47 PM


(:

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Robert E. Jordan
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12 posted 2009-02-22 05:29 PM


Thanks dear Juju,

For the lovely smilly face.

Love Bobby

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