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lainie22
New Member

since 2009-02-19

Posts 2

0 posted 2009-02-20 12:10 PM

They hurt her
They push her around
But she still hangs around them
Then she falls to the ground

She loves them
But they don't love her back
They don't even care
What kind of friends are that?

She supports them
In everything they do
But when she asks for a favor
They all say "Why should I help you?!"

She's hated
By most of who she loves
She gets crushed, she gets hurt
Something she is really sick of

The people she loves,
They don't love her back
Every time she is vulnerable
They pounce and attack

There are people out there
That tell her the truth
They try to comfort her
Tell her to keep to her youth

She wants to hear "I Love You"
From those people someday
Someday before
Her life, fades away.....

Boshii2
Member

since 2009-02-01

Posts 146

1 posted 2009-02-20 01:20 AM

helloo
I like what you are doing.
I liked both your pieces.
It's fun in here.
Welcome..Boshii2

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

2 posted 2009-02-20 05:12 AM

Good emotive writing. There's nothing as sinister or guaranteed to break your heart as false friends.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

sarah 45
Member

since 2008-12-19

Posts 54

3 posted 2009-02-20 09:52 AM

why would u even consider people like those "frinds" , U never have to stick around people like them, do hear about the say (friends in need are friends indeed)?
take care of urself & stay away from people like those even if think of them as friends

Nice writing, welcome 2 pip, hopin' u'll find better friends around here

T.C

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2009-02-20 01:35 PM

lainie22 - some friends are not friends at all, and one should let them go.. True friends I found are very hard to find, but when one does they are true. Wish you the best...

BC

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2009-02-20 02:56 PM

Whoa! This person sure needs to find some new friends. Sometimes the ones we think we want to be part of send us rejection for a reason, we were not meant to be part of them.

Check your email for a welcoming surprise, and welcome to Passions In Poetry.

Carpe' Diem,
Mysteria

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

6 posted 2009-02-20 03:30 PM

Sad

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2009-02-20 03:44 PM

Welcome to Pips. As the old saying goes, "With friends like that, you don't need enemies."
Hope you enjoy Pips.

Blood.Wolf
Member

since 2009-02-09

Posts 54
GA, USA

8 posted 2009-02-21 04:35 PM

Quite a sad piece. It's hard to find good friends these days, as everyone's trying to be "cool" or "in" at school. This basically spells it out. ^.^ Good job!

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