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Monk Frost I!
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0 posted 2009-02-19 12:11 PM


The art of word is upon my easel
My palette to explain the denial


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1 posted 2009-02-19 02:29 AM


awesome


gilead
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2 posted 2009-02-19 08:11 PM


Magnificent, Monk! Word compression in its finest hour~

art

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3 posted 2009-03-08 05:29 PM


Humm, I think you mean:

"The art of word is upon my easel
My palette to explain the diesel"

Yes, surely that makes more sense.  Plus, and it is a BIG plus, it rhymes.

2islander2
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4 posted 2009-03-09 05:43 PM


great, i am fond of short poems.

regards

yann

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