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PrestonThePoet
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0 posted 2009-02-18 11:07 PM


Crush the piano keys
All that pressure,
Releasing your tension;
Sing with the confidence.
You’ve never had.
Be the artist,
Dreams see you as.
The spotlight’s on.
Shine brighter.
Don’t just play what you know.
Feel your music.
Let your heart be the beat.
Crush those piano keys.
Sing with newfound confidence.
Shine brighter than the stars themselves.


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2009-02-19 02:26 AM


I've crushed a few piano keys myself

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turtle
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since 2009-01-23
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2 posted 2009-02-19 02:38 PM


Preston, this needs a little work, but you're well ahead of most of what I'm reading here this morning.

turtle

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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3 posted 2009-02-19 03:25 PM


Right on Preston.
I agree, the passion is to be let loose.....

Throw down on those keys and let's rock!!

Eric

If you're a classical piano player then give it your best render and passion.

Eric

Margherita
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4 posted 2009-02-19 05:33 PM


I just heard a piano performance a while ago and looked at my lonely piano and thought it was time to play it again ... now isn't this passionate poem of yours just speaking to me?

Very good write!

Love,
Margherita

PrestonThePoet
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5 posted 2009-02-19 10:49 PM


turtle, i agree fully, i feel like its on the right, track just not there yet, ill have to look it over and think while playing a few tunes haha.

But thanks all for the compliments.

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